2021考研英语小作文求职信(8-分)范文赏析二

摘要：写作作为考研英语中一项重要的题型，所以要早早练习起来，暑期正是考研英语提升的大好时期，本篇文章将给大家分享2021考研英语小作文求职信(8-10分)范文赏析一，希望能给2021考研考生备考提供帮助~。

考研英语待批改作文：

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Dear Mr. Yu,

I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

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精品资料欢迎阅读 Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Mr. Yu,

I just read an advertisement in(改为on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of(改为for) your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改为of) computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(删除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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精品资料欢迎阅读 8分

同学你好，要注意控制字数，考研的时候超过20个词扣0.5分,超过50词只给1分辛苦分。标点符号与后面的单词空一格。你的作文没有大问题，但是你对介词的使用不太清楚，这说明你的语感还不太好，因此，建议你多读一些英文书籍。

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