最新高中英语写作专项提高训练：(17)建议信(一)

一、书面表达

〔2021年山东青岛考前适应性测试 〕假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友 Peter发邮件说, 他正在学汉语,但感觉很吃力,请求你给予帮助.请给他回封邮件,内容包括： 1 .举例说明汉语学习的特点； 2 .提供一些可行的建议. 注意：

1 .词数100左右；

2 .可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.

___ ［参考范文］ Dear Peter ,

Hope this e-mail finds you well! Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties.It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning.With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter, my suggestions are as follows.

Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis.Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.

Those are the tips on my mind now.I would always be pleased to offer you help.I do hope you will find these proposals practical.

Yours sincerely ,

Li Hua

二、书面表达

为了帮助中学生健康成长, 某中学英文报开辟了 “ HEART-TO-HEART专栏.假设你是该 栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为 Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰： 近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响.请用英文给该同学写一封回信.

内容要点如下：

1 .表示理解并给予抚慰； 2 .提出建议并说明理由. 注意：

1 .词数120左右；

2 .信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3 .信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数. 参考词汇：temper n. Hi Worried.:

I ' m sorry to know that you' re having such a had time at the moment.

脾气,情绪

Yours,

Jamie 【范文】 Hi Worried:

I ' m sorry to know that you' re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don' t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you ' ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team gameswith your friends , as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.

And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you ' ll soon feel calmer and c arry on as normal. Yours ,

Jamie

三、书面表达

随着近年来城市开展速度的加快,

很多反映城市历史风貌的古建筑屡遭破坏.

为题向报社写一封建议信.

就这个问

题请彳^以 How to Protect the Ancient Buildings 要点如下：

1 .很多古建筑被拆； 2 .呼吁拯救这些古建筑；

3 .希望有合理的解决方法. 注意： 1 .词数100左右；

2 .可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.

How to Protect the Ancient Buildings

_________ 【范文］

How to Protect the Ancient Buildings

In recent years, as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people. They want to make room for housing or offices in urban construction. Do you think we should try to protect those old buildings or replace them with the modern ones?

I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city. And the young will learn a lot when

they visit the historical relic sites. The government and related departments should find a suitable solution to these problems. As a citizen, it is my and everyone

duty to spare no efforts to take any way to protect the historical property.

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四、书面表达

在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提升复习效率,广泛征求学生意见.假设你叫张 华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议.

・ 适当放慢进度,留出思考时间 ・ 反复练习重要、易错知识点 ・ 指导方法

・ 减少作业量以保证质量 ・ 给予更多鼓励

注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯. 2 .要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思； 3 .词数：100个左右.开头已给出,不计词数. Dear Mr. Wang,

We re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

_________ ［参考范文］ Dear Mr. Wang,

We re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

As you

know, we didn ' t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time

to think for

ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused,

would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write

in natural English. I still have another

request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

五、书面表达

假定你是中学生李华.在国外中学生贴吧上看到一位名叫 看到如下内容.请你根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求跟帖. 写作要点：

1 .说明自己的看法；

2 .陈述自己的理由〔可举例说明〕； 3 .提出至少两条建议. 要求：

1.短文须写在做题卡的指定区域. 3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯.

2.短文词数不少于100 〔不含已写好的局部〕.

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【参考范文】书面表达(总分值 30分)(One possible version) Slowstudent,

This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents ' meeting; instead, you ' d better take a proper attitude to it.

In fact, a parents' meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students ' situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality.

As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. Whentalking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the

key

to solving the problem.

Yours, Li Hua

(Another possible version) Slowstudent,

This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, if you use your head a little bit, it is easy to deal with. Let me put it clearer. Now that parents

' meetings

bring troubles and unhappiness to you, that would be okay if there were no such kind of meeting. It is impossible for you to forbid your school or your class to hold a parents ' meeting, but you can “forbid \" your parents to attend the meeting. How? One way is not telling your parents there will be a parents

' meeting. Another is

trying to say something bad about the meeting (say, the meeting is intended for nothing but to collect money) so that your parents hate to go to it. These approaches prove effective, for I am as slow a student as you.

Yours, Li Hua

六、书面表达

假设你是李华.你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵.3月9日是Peter生日, Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议.请你根据以下要 点给Tom回一封邮件： 1 .礼物选择： 2 .你的理由； 3 .其它和解建议. 注意：

1 .词数100左右：

2 .可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯： 3 .开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数.

Dear Tom,

I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【参考范文】 One possible version Dear Tom,

I ' m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise

by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally- friendly means of transport. It ' s convenient for him to get around as well.

Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.

Best wishes,

Li Hua